
Your viewpoint or my point of view?
Ambling, rambling, almost gambling.
Alliterations flow.
But still, I do not know.
I never have and never will.
But then I hear you say,
You know the drill.
What drill?
What thrill?
What bitter pill?
Resonances flow you know.
And so it goes, or blows, or glows, who knows?
I don’t understand.
Totally underhand.
It’s yours for under a grand.
The farmer says,
“Get off my land,,
You and your band,
You’re Banned!”
Assonances.
Resonances.
Alliterations flow.
Absolutely always avoid annoying alliterations.
That’s my point of view.
It doesn’t rhyme,
It don’t keep time,
The timbres right off key.
Grammar’s lousy too, but that’s just me!
©Joseph R. Mason 2021
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Delightful piece and brilliantly written! Thank you for participating!
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Lovely rhythm.
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Thank you.
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pleasure.
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